Adapted from an actual H2 'A' Level Economics examination paper
JC ECONOMICS ESSAYS - Economics Tutor's Comments: This economics essay has a lot of good material on the Singapore government, economic policies, and the Singapore context, which is excellent - always address your material to the context of the question. Answering the essay question with reference to real world, relevant, and specific examples is an incredibly effective exam strategy in economics examinations. Remember always to have good examples alongside excellent understanding of economic theory and models. However, the usual questions apply - how would you improve upon the essay introduction? What is good or what is not so good about the body of the paper? What is good about the essay conclusion? Take note of the excellent use of signposting in the conclusion. However, how could the conclusion be buttressed and developed? What else could the student have written, or how could the student have written the evaluative conclusion better? Think about how you would write a better conclusion to make this economics essay the best that it can be.